Hi my friends at this point I finally feel like my story idea is coming together, but I’m still deciding between two slightly different directions for how the film will unfold. At first I had like one solid idea but after my group meeting they gave me such cool upgrades it made me rethink everything. Both versions follow the same main concept: a man who committed a hit and run years ago is forced to confront the guilt he buried when strange and unsettling things start happening around him.
In the first version, the psychological pressure pushes him toward doing the one thing he has avoided for years.. confessing. The mysterious events begin to feel like they are forcing him to confront the truth, and he eventually decides to go somewhere where he believes he can finally admit what he did, which is the police station (very very scary). This version focuses more on the idea that guilt itself can push someone to reveal the truth, even if no one else knows what happened.
In the second version, the story leans more into the unsettling atmosphere and mystery. Instead of focusing on confession, the film builds tension through strange and unexplained events that make the main character question what is real. The audience is left wondering whether what he is experiencing is supernatural, psychological, or simply the result of years of suppressed guilt. This version I came up with after my group meeting and they told me I could make my main character have an illness, like be bipolar or schizophrenic so he doesn't remember the real version of what happened.
Both directions explore the same theme, how guilt can follow someone long after they think they have escaped it, but they create slightly different interpretations of the story.
One challenge with the First version is that it would involve filming in a location like a police station, which might be difficult to arrange. Because of that, the second version may end up being more realistic to produce while still keeping the psychological tension that I want the film to have.
My next step is creating a storyboard so I can plan out the visual structure of the film and decide which direction works best on screen. I am uploading Version 2 since it is what I am most likely going to do. But I just realized in my storyboard it reveals everything so what is the point of being secretive... Since this story relies heavily on atmosphere and tension, planning the shots ahead of time will help me understand how the scenes should flow.
Along with that, I created a mood board and visual references for the character and overall tone of the film.
I found all these pictures on pinterest.com and now I'm scared. All my feed is now creepy stuff when I had it perfectly crafted to my preferences and now I'm mad, but whateverrr. I decided to find pictures representing important scenes or props I want to incorporate such as the clock, the dead girl, and the main character's internal struggles. I like it because I feel it really captures the vibe I am trying to go for.
I am also starting to look for an actor for the main character. Ideally I want someone in their mid-20s to early 30s who looks like a regular person. The character should feel believable, because the story depends on the audience understanding that this is someone who has tried to live a normal life despite what he did in the past. And I CANNOT repeat the same mistake as last year and pick the first older person I can find, so this time I'm running auditions!
Storyboard picture references:
- Scene 1, Guy driving using a phone
- Scene 1, Girl walking on road
- Scene 1, Flashing headlights
- Scene 2, Man stepping out of car
- Scene 2, Man hiding something in bush
- Scene 3, Package outside door
- Scene 3, Man opening package

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